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Post by Taboo on May 7, 2013 20:02:00 GMT -5
If theres any sort of virus, I suggest rabies. -fades away- It can take weeks or years for symptoms to show.
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Post by drifter on May 8, 2013 6:58:10 GMT -5
Some of these characters are already "out of it" that their symptoms and their personality would just mix so well that you'd never know if they were sick until last second. Complete random mouth foaming, and then caput LOL
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Post by Jason on May 8, 2013 15:25:55 GMT -5
*coughJasperfoamsatthemouthwithoutrabiescough*
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Post by drifter on May 8, 2013 16:59:11 GMT -5
I can see that. Jasper purring *foam* Jasper eating *foam* Jasper using the bathroom *foam* LOL Jasper cleaning himself *foam* Neo : Don't you think that that is a tad counterproductive? Jasper : *licklick foam all over himself licklick foam all over himself*
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Post by OnyxOryx on May 10, 2013 13:33:02 GMT -5
its an interesting Idea Drift. But, Idk how it'd work. Given the timeline and such. I beleive Coke's due to leave shortly. Plus I was hoping for Naji to speak to her two cubs.. Just being lazy.. x.x
But it is a good idea. Need Kah's input though, since it involves a lot of her chars.. and Silv's Funeral.
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Post by kahara on May 12, 2013 7:44:52 GMT -5
This has to do with Najisi and her cubs and stuff. So Najisi is minding her own business in Meurt seeing as they haven't made the full move to Volcano and all and then bam, she goes into labor. Well there's not much she can do about giving birth. But in real litters it can take an hour or more between a cub, pup, kitten etc. being born. So she cleans herself up and tries to move the cub and find Reno before she's noticed. She's a spy, she has a good chance of not being seen. Well low-and-behold Cocaine sees her. Being the sadistic f--k that he can be kinda gets the hint of whose cub this is. Najisi says its a Ceon cub, that she remembered a female being with Ceon within the time she was in his pride. She figured the female had to have cubs and so there were. Cocaine, being not so easily fooled, agrees. And suggests that Najisi and he take this cub to Funeral. There's really no running at this point for Najisi so she has no choice. Cocaine suggests to Funeral that Carnal and Osic kill the cub, good Donovans or some sort of jazz like that. Really Cocaine just wants to see the look on Najisi's face as she watches her children unknowingly kill their own sibling. Reno wants to see what all the commotion is and trying not to blow their hard worked plans out into the open he suggests that Najisi must have traveled pretty far perhaps to retrieve the cub so he takes her away to "rest" but really he knows she's in labor takes her to Volcano... I get there's probably some sort of timeline complication with this but it was an idea that just sort of hit and I wanted to share. Woah mother of plot twists batman.
Woo okay uhh.
Now correct me if I'm wrong, but there's one big problem with this: if Cocaine sees Najisi in labour with one cub already, even if she says it's not hers and she tries to say let's take it to Fune.. well I hope you understand? Like said, Cocaine is not easily fooled. He'll know it's hers, and chances are he'll agree to have her go back to Meur and have the cub killed. He wouldn't let Najisi out of his sights, at all. And Reno would be the last one allowed near Najisi, Fune and Coke during the killing of a Ceon cub, what with what Fune and Coke have overheard at this point in time.
It's interesting, but I don't think it's really plausible. Najisi's very motherly; I can't see her giving up even one cub without a fight. And Coke and Fune are bloody brilliant and sadistic, they won't let her go. It'd pretty much wash La Morte down the drain before it gets on its paws.
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Post by Caylis on May 12, 2013 11:31:51 GMT -5
Correct me if I'm wrong but like Kah said, maybe Reno wouldn't be allowed BUT what if Brynn [Since she might have been a La Morte member.], what if she stands up to Cocaine and Funeral and protects Najisi, sacrificing herself for her cubs and for Naji? I know it might get her killed but it would add some drama within it, but I don't think it'd work but at least I tried.
Anyway, other plots that crossed my mind recently was that, I have a clan of my own that Caylis [in the future.] will rule and get chased off by her own clan. But what I was thinking is that Caylis would leave Meur then after a few weeks, she would come back and tell everyone what happened to her. If you have any feedback, comments or questions, feel free to lemme know.
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Post by kahara on May 12, 2013 13:38:35 GMT -5
..Does Brynn have zero motherly instincts? Chances are, it'll kill Brynn, Najisi AND Najisi's cubs killed. They won't spare Najisi just because Brynn wants to try and do the right thing. Not only that but it puts her cubs at risk - if Coke and Fune suspect Brynn is in on whatever Reno and Najisi have been doing, they may very well consider killing her cubs as they may be "brain washed" into the "wrong line of thinking".
& That's a personal plot. I don't see Coke or Fune getting involved in it. So you're free to do it as long as you understand how it /MIGHT/ end.
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Post by TheWG on May 12, 2013 13:51:09 GMT -5
Okay for one things, I do NOT believe Brynneth would be allowed near her especially if Reno isn't. Furthermore, don't just sacrifice your characters willy nilly, I horribly doubt Funeral and Coke would stop their attacking Najisi at the volunteered sacrifice of another, it'd just be a bump in the road, If they knew who's cub it was they'd still make her pay, regardless, I believe (correct me if I'm wrong here). Brynneth joining in the fray may get them further down shit creek, and wouldn't be a very wise thing to do on her part.
EDIT Ninja'd by Kah, pretty much the same she said lD
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Post by Caylis on May 12, 2013 14:12:02 GMT -5
True.. -is being a derp-
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Post by drifter on May 12, 2013 21:23:08 GMT -5
Lots o' replies in the time I've been gone.
Well in any case, like I said it was just a sudden thought. I kinda figured there would be a few complications with it. But it is a pretty good turn of events so maybe the general idea of it can be considered again for a different scenario.
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Post by kahara on May 13, 2013 5:20:35 GMT -5
Oh yeah. I mean the general concept of the plot you suggest is brilliant. It just doesn't fit into the timeline in a way that would allow for a even remotely happy ending for... well, anyone. Unless you're Coke and Fune.
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Post by Jason on May 13, 2013 19:00:32 GMT -5
Well, I know he isn't such a presence, but maybe Jasper could catch her. While he would not report her to Coke or Funeral directly, he would love having something to hold over her. He absolutely loves toying with others. She could be caught by someone else, too. I doubt Jasper is not the only schemer in Meurtrier. Though, he mainly does his stuff at the expense of others, purely for his own entertainment.
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Post by TheWG on May 13, 2013 20:26:56 GMT -5
I always thought that- In the move of La Morte itself- Circa would become involved because of her relation to Brynneth. Her leaving with the cubs would diffidently prompt Circa to try and find her and any other dislocated members, and she would not be happy of her findings- but that's a personal plot of course.
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Post by kahara on May 13, 2013 23:41:53 GMT -5
That's something you'd discuss with Blade, Alice. It's more personal if Jasper wouldn't be involving Coke or Fune. Though it should be noted that if Jasper did find out and later told Coke and Fune, they'd have more than just questions as to why he didn't tell them sooner.
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